I think the line for 3PO after his memory is restored sounds great once put into the timeline, adjusting pitch a little to match the surrounding dialogue and adding 3PO motor/gear sounds.

Unfortunately, the existing line, “It seems diplomacy is not our specialty” is too long to fit nicely into the scene as it is. Also, the line in V2 for the exchange between 3PO and the trooper has some silly humor but our line seems to be flat in context. Like it should be funny but is played straight. So I think I’ll leave it as we had it for V2. (I honestly cannot remember what the scene was for V1; does anyone remember? lol)

And the dialogue for Poe. Even though what we had before seemed cheesy, I think the reworked lines are even more so. With what we had prior, Poe clearly says this is a stockpile of old destroyers and then says they’ve been modified with cannons. The new one seems to be less clear about these things. I think at the end of the day one has to accept that a huge fleet of Star Destroyers like that is just kind of dumb regardless. So I intend to use what JJB has already generated before.

All things considered, I’m declaring V3 ‘sync-locked,’ which will let me chip away at the arduous task of adjusting all the subtitle and audio tracks. It’ll still be a while for that reason, but V3 and this project’s full culmination will be nigh.