As a fellow Picard editor, I’m interested in seeing your take.
My own eventual plans for season 3 are heading toward the ambitious idea trying to reverse its order with season 2, letting Jurati resurrect the Borg in a new form after their final defeat while Picard explores his childhood as part of adjusting to being a father.
That’s a really cool idea!! If you tightened up some of the season 2 plotlines that seem to exist to pad time, I could see a really compelling story.
I sometimes wonder if they’ll do anything with the ending of season 2. A Borg splinter group requesting Federation status is kind of huge for Trek lore. Anyway, I’ll DM you the link to my edit and would love to hear if you finish your project - could make me a real fan of S2!