This all sounds pretty good! I do have one recommendation though. You should add the scene were Jocasta-Nu tells Obi-wan about Count Dooku. You may have to add the rest of the scene back with obi-wan trying to find Komino but I think it’s worth it. Dooku is the main antagonist of the movie so it’s good to know who he is and where he came from. It also alludes to his motivation for going against the Republic.
Post #1543338
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- Squeaky Water Wheel
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- Attack of the Clones - Vader Edition (WIP)
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- Date created
- 15-Jun-2023, 7:55 PM