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Post #1543219

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Telion
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STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
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14-Jun-2023, 3:39 PM

Yeah gotta agree with all three of ya. He says “on the moon”. He means ON THE MOON. But he ain’t on the moon.

Yeah the landing squeance pacing and such does work rly well rn, but we’ll have to see how it works with all Adywans changes anyway, the pacing will change,

And yeah I agree he could have been on the moon, just somewhere else, but idk how that could easily be convayed to the audiance without some kind of obtrusive dialog or more landing sequances, like will we see Vader just dordling around waiting… Okay that would be funny but yeah.

If something needs to change it would probably be the line, as that scene’s dialog is already planned for a small rework an its probably the simplest solusion.