This is looking great. I’m very excited to see the changelog for Book 4, let alone the actual edit! Having a whole movie without Grogu will hopefully make the reunification an emotional moment, rather than the disappointing flip flop it is in the original material.
As for the Boba sniper scene in Book 3, a “grab the armour” line from the scavengers would tighten this up brilliantly, I think it’s an excellent idea from DarthMeme.