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Post #1542820

Author
Jar Jar Bricks
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
10-Jun-2023, 3:35 PM

Here is my first draft for Poe: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1H-k1hhBjOiGbNoze_8V9S8lySx60wGTi/view?usp=sharing

I had to change the wording for the final sentence because otherwise it came out sounding too much like prequel dialog. Keep in mind that it’s split up by sentence, so point out which sentence (if any) needs to be generated again based on the other sentences around it.

Personally, I’m not happy with the first sentence yet but everything else sounds good to me.