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Post #1540323

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Xhicrastin
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
22-May-2023, 11:11 AM

EddieDean said:

Yeah but the poisoning storyline suuuuucks. It’s extremely dull, and gives us no value for our main characters. If the line about Maul killing children is a direct reference to that, I’ll trim around it.

It’s tough since the line is directed towards Almec. But if there’s a way to make it so it’s thrown at Maul then it might work. Though I’m not sure how Satine could know that sort of detail.