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Post #1540275

Author
EddieDean
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
22-May-2023, 4:58 AM

Great feedback, thanks! I really appreciate it. I keep notes of every bit of feedback I get sent, however small, and consider absolutely all of them. I (admittedly slowly) work through all of the changes suggested.

Specific responses:

  • It might be worth me opening up discussion on s01e05 again. Back in the day, the thought process was that the Domino Squad arc was paced kind of oddly - they’re terrible, then ‘best clones ever’, then assigned a backwater job, then made 501st for surviving, then save Kamino, then are made ARC troopers for that. I’d thought that it was best (and snappier) to have a more sensible arc of fail > bad posting > succeed. But perhaps something closer to the original is wiser. I don’t think we need two failed training sessions before they succeed, but maybe we could have more of the Rookies episode (just with one training session and a bit less adversary) and end nearer success.
  • For s02e03, s03e04 and s04e07, I agree with adding back those few key scenes.
  • I think I’m still happy with keeping the Mando/Maul content starting early. I know the art style is slightly different but I don’t think it’s radical enough to be obvious unless you really know, and the feedback on this approach of making them the spine of the show has broadly been very positive.

Thanks again!