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Post #1540147

Author
krlozdac
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
21-May-2023, 12:07 PM

DZ-330 said:

Their fleet could annihilate us with their superlaser cannons

I like this quite a bit. May I suggest replacing “us” with “any opposition” just to make it clear that they’re a threat to every world in the galaxy and not just to Ajan Kloss or the Resistance.

So something like “Their fleet could annihilate any opposition with their superlaser cannons