Also, what were your thoughts on the proposed changes to the Citadel episode? I just wanted to know if you ended up considering them for a new version or not.
Yeah, I’ll revisit that content. Perhaps not too soon, as I have a few other things taking my free time in the short term, but I’ll get back into it (and review yours) and see what can be reasonably trimmed. I don’t know why I have such edit-blindness for that episode but I’ll do my best.
In other news, I realised the perfect place for those shots of Plo rescuing Ahsoka. It naturally belongs in the Malevolence arc, where it’s the most relevant, and I had thought I’d put it playing over the moment where she talks about it. But the show doesn’t use the ~2 second voiceover flashback as a storytelling devic, so it doesn’t really work. However, instead it’ll fit really nicely when Ahsoka reaches out with the force to Plo. That section was already cut quite awkwardly, so it’ll clean that up nicely, whilst also being a totally valid ‘feeling’ for Ahsoka to be feeling for when she’s searching for the person who first discovered her.