Spence, long time, no speak. Glad to see you’re doing this.
Honestly, I like most of your changes here, brother!
I prefer Yoda not fight at all if I can throw my two cents in. I think I agree, that Yoda is one too many things going on.
I would make one minor edit to the landing platform scene. I’ve always cut, “I’ve failed you, Senator,” as it makes no sense. That’s precisely what a decoy does. Dumb writing in my opinion.
This is shaping up great! Keep it up!