Originally posted by: theredbaron
This might sound funny, but I have finally proof-read half of my screenplay and have decided on a few minor changes. No major plot changes or anything. Mostly formatting and a bit of dialogue. For now, I have decided to settle with Obi-wan actively searching for an apprentice, as much of the dialogue and plot from the Tatooine segment actually relies on this.
This might sound funny, but I have finally proof-read half of my screenplay and have decided on a few minor changes. No major plot changes or anything. Mostly formatting and a bit of dialogue. For now, I have decided to settle with Obi-wan actively searching for an apprentice, as much of the dialogue and plot from the Tatooine segment actually relies on this.
I have finally proof-read the whole thing and made some minor changes accordingly. This will be my near-final draft for now, unless my whole world gets turned upside-down. I feel I need to devise a name for General Grievous' lieutenant, as he appears often enough to warrant a name. I want it to sound Star Wars-ish; similar to the names of Vader's admirals (except maybe Ozzel, sounds dorky). Any suggestions, people?