The music cues are absolutely brilliant. Nicely done.
What exactly is wrong with “Your need for victory, Anakin, it blinds you”? I took it to mean that a fight still isn’t over even though an opponent is disarmed. Seems like a valuable lesson for a Padawan, but it could be interpreted in a way that he is being too harsh on him and “holding him back”.
The way I understand it, the end of the fight will remain clunky like that unless it’s reinstated.
Personally, I removed it because I don’t need that moment in my edit I’m making, but I can see the argument for keeping it. I have this scene very early in Attack of the Clones. So I just need it to get the job done so we can move on to the main story.