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Post #1536190

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SpenceEdit
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Making the Obi-Wan & Anakin training session (From the Kenobi series) work in an AOTC edit.
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Date created
27-Apr-2023, 11:41 PM

You all have done some amazing work here! One thing constantly bothers me when trying to put all of these scenes together into one fight: It’s missing a shot. There needs to be a close up shot of Obi-Wan starting to move after Anakin disarms him. Without it, there’s a jarring cut from Anakin’s close up to an extremely wide shot of Obi-Wan already in motion, which feels disjointed and hard for the brain and eye to follow. It also very suddenly breaks the 180 rule, which doesn’t help but can’t really be avoided entirely. It just doesn’t feel right.

I did a little mock up of inserting a shot into that spot, I’m sure there are other options between the show and the PT, but I thought this illustrated my point well enough:

https://streamable.com/iigfu3

I really think that shot is super important to make the scene flow correctly. I don’t know how to explain it, but I can feel that it’s missing.