The emphasis on “release” might make the first line too long, but I really liked the delivery of it otherwise. I’m having a hard time generating one that has the same delivery but less emphasis.
As for the final line, here it is if needed: https://drive.google.com/file/d/13uX1vPD3zcp6ZzbwYhP1yVXkmFmQBjgm/view?usp=sharing
EDIT: Finally got a faster delivery that didn’t sound too bad - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1vq85KwTXAPdqXfDZKFA59WiOKNigCKSc/view?usp=sharing