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Post #1535660

Author
EddieDean
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
25-Apr-2023, 4:27 AM

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you liked the concept. I can change the aspect ratio if people agree, though for me I thought it worked OK since the format permits a little weirdness.

I could switch the scene of Ahsoka training with two lightsabers with her using two to protect Padmé. The reason I originally went with this order was threefold: Firstly, I thought it was OK since she can have and use the second lightsaber before formally training with it. But secondly, I figured that not-quite-chronological was acceptable here, instead emphasising the way she’s thinking in thematic chunks. First, during her early training, she’s focused on Anakin’s protective side, which reminds her of Padmé, and her own relationship with her; and then, as the training intensifies, she focuses more on her own training and her Jedi path. And thirdly, it puts the official second lightsaber training with Yoda right next to when she starts also using it in her training against clones. But I’m not married to that ordering.