I wonder if for Chapter 21 if it could be edited to make Carson holocall instead of travel to coruscant.
With him planet hoping back and forth it kind of removes tension because Nevarro would have been completely destroyed in that time.
It wouldn’t be perfect because he still travels to Mando and Mando then to Nevarro but it would be better in my opinion.
Not sure if it’s possible with the shots you’ve got to work with but thought it was worth putting the idea out there.