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This is my 7th draft of my rewrite for Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace. Yes, I have kept the title, as I believe that it is actually appropriate for the story I have written. Feel free to criticise the actual work, dialogue, etc., but DO NOT CRITICISE THE ENDEAVOUR ITSELF. I have already written this, and I am closer to finishing Episodes II and III than I am to starting them. Abandoning these projects is out of the question for me. I highly doubt these will ever end up as actual films - this is for my personal satisfaction, and perhaps it will fulfill other OT fans' visions of Star Wars as well. My main aim was continuity in all the backstory elements explicitly presented in the OT. In other areas, I read between the lines to find a plausible and entertaining plot. Also with regards to characters, I have used a lot of names from the PT. Sometimes for convenience's sake, other times for aesthetic reasons.
Anyway, please take the time to read this, and tell me what you think. This is a working document, so I am open to criticism.
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