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Post #1530283

Author
EddieDean
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
25-Mar-2023, 5:32 AM

Glad you’re enjoying reading the process!

I’m never done done, so please always feel free to suggest things! This is totally a living project.

  1. I did end up using ‘Snips’ in a few places.
  2. That’s a nice nod, but I wanted to use ‘Force’ since it’s got a lot of implications - the military force, the darksiders on the rise, and the dark side of the force rising within Anakin. I like titles which can be read in a few ways.
  3. I did end up going a little different with that text. Originally I tried to explain all three stories, but that didn’t really work. Now it’s still six sentences, but I took a more informal ‘storyteller’ tone with it.