That’s sounding a lot closer to the original lines, though the delivery on the new line still sounds a bit more like a narration. Also I think “old Empire” would make more sense instead of “old war”.
Post #1528221
- Author
- Burbin
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1528221/action/topic#1528221
- Date created
- 11-Mar-2023, 5:25 PM