I just watched the film with my brother and his friend. They had the following feedback:

Overall, a massive improvement over the original
Would be interested in some sort of line which indicates the Republic is endlessly debating sending in support, thus why they never intervene.
The Sith whispers may be a bit too subtle. I had to point it out to them.
My brother would like to see some audio lines indicating what Rey is hearing in Kylo’s head about fearing not being as strong as Darth Vader. This would be similar to what Kylo hears in Poe’s head.
Visually, Jakku may need to be more consistent. Although the morning and evening would adjust light levels, they think it makes it look like they’re on a completely different world at times.
Humor has been trimmed very well, but my brother thinks you could have gone even further in a couple places. He didn’t elaborate lol.