Those Poe lines sound great, JJB! I’d almost asked you to do them when asking for the ‘Ilum System’ line, but I shouldn’t have worried. All these will definitely be in consideration for V2.
And yes, Restructured as an idea does feel a lot like how I imagine things might have gone in '76 and '77, keeping every option on the table and continuously moving to make the film better, even up to the very end. Because sometimes that’s really what saves a film.
Anyway, here’s a poster for the edit that I’ve been working on for a while:
This and a textless version have been added to the 5 GB folder.