Here’s a take on that snippet:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DzL3_L4stTwOfwPFixnLhjnxzCp-AQkT/view?usp=sharing
The nice part is we are seeing that shot from the perspective of Poe’s cockpit, so you won’t have to apply a comm effect to it.
Here’s the longer line just in case (even though it doesn’t seem like it would fit anywhere):
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kb91RvqPErpOTXMln7KRtdZs8UD9r-mq/view?usp=sharing