Just finished watching through it all! Overall, magnificently done. It’s taken TFA from a 7/10 to an 8 or 9 in my books. I wanted to compile a list of feedback I had for v2:

You can still hear the end of Han saying “Get outta there” in the Falcon
I’m wondering if it might be worth it to just cut out “He worked on the base” from the end of Poe’s new line. We learn this information later, anyway.
Snoke calls Kylo “Solo” at the end of their second meeting. There’s nothing particularly wrong with this, I’m just wondering why you chose to add this in. Was it him trying to get on Kylo’s nerves?
I highly recommend applying a “mirroring” effect to the reaction shots of the pilots when Starkiller Base fires. They’re reused shots, but this effect may help in disguising that.
I really enjoyed the scene in Hal’s edit where Hux suggests to Snoke that they target the Resistance base next. Also, that part that mentions how long it will be until it is recharged. It makes Poe’s attack on the oscillator much more than just an attempt at revenge. I would prefer it if this were reinstated.
As I said before, I’m just curious if your goal was to have her Sith eyes for only that brief moment, or throughout the remainder of it? Because they don’t appear to be there except for the closeup shot. To make less work of this, perhaps they could fade out at a certain point.
I would love some (more?) porg sounds on Ahch-To 😃

That’s all I got for now!