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Post #1527036

Author
Jar Jar Bricks
Parent topic
The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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Date created
3-Mar-2023, 3:27 PM

I think the gap between “a weapon located in the Ilum system” and “he worked on the base” is perfect. I would just take a second look at the word “Finn”. How would it sound if you used replaced that word with the reading I gave you?