At Nev’s recommendation, I applied a traditional American accent to it and it seems to be working better. This time, I split it up into 2 parts:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1reRonU_m4zCRf6FjWxjLZdj3REEMI0lC/view?usp=sharing
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_E7nrron_PSXO7X2XUDG4Jv6BCMkZXEe/view?usp=sharing
Here it is together:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/11OYkuOQJw1et84QYJruMLiCMBxxf0tM3/view?usp=sharing