I have a lot of Kylo AI line suggestions, but I’ll take it one at a time so as to not overwhelm. Since this one could benefit Hal, that’s where I’ll start.
From the cutlist:
After Kylo Ren says “I will find you,” cut him saying “…and turn you to the dark side.” It’s implied that he will try to do that once he finds her, but why say it aloud? He should be trying to seduce her to the dark side and masking his intentions.
Here’s an idea for a replacement Kylo line:
“My mother doesn’t see the darkness in you. Your friends don’t either. But I do.”
This is taken directly from the novelization by the way, decent chance it was in the film at some point.