That’s great, man!
I know when discussing it before, we had floated “birth” of her son instead of death. Might be good to generate that line, as I’m sure someone or other may want it even if I don’t.
It’d also be good to get a few readings of “Lesson three.” Not sure I’ll use it but, again, there’ll be interest.
I’m not sure if something could be done to replace a bit of screen time around the “Leia knew it too.”
Luke: “Because you’re a Palpatine. __________.”
Rey: “She didn’t tell me.”
Luke: “…”
Rey: “She still trained me.”
Luke: “________. Your heart. _________. Some things are stronger than blood. Confronting fear is the destiny of a Jedi…”
I bet this will help the Rey Nobody version even more.