I haven't read your whole script yet but so far I like it. The only thing I'm not sure about is the idea of Anakin actively seeking an apprentice. I think them meeting by chance (or the will of the force) while Obi-Wan is on some other mission or errand works better.
I haven't read your whole script yet but so far I like it. The only thing I'm not sure about is the idea of Anakin actively seeking an apprentice. I think them meeting by chance (or the will of the force) while Obi-Wan is on some other mission or errand works better.