Also just realised that, from the Martez arc, I could remove the scene of Ahsoka and the Martez sisters meeting with the king’s representative on Kessel. This’ll streamline that slow portion, instead having the pickup of the spice apparently arranged by Pintu (who’s already the guy in my edit who gives them this job). It’ll also work quite nicely, since it means that the pickup of spice, and the plan to deliver them to crime lords, is much more of a suprise to Ahsoka and Trace, better justifying Trace’s rash decision. I can still include a line from the cut scene to explain that spice can be used for both medicine and narcotics, to explain why they’d originally think the trip was legit.
Post #1524788
- Author
- EddieDean
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- The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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- Date created
- 20-Feb-2023, 8:57 AM