Originally posted by: Anakin's Mannequin
Good read. Very well done Baron! Other than a couple of lines ("Heavens to Murgatroid!"
), it was very imaginative. It included some of the good things from the prequels, and kept a sense of consistency with the OT.
Good read. Very well done Baron! Other than a couple of lines ("Heavens to Murgatroid!"
), it was very imaginative. It included some of the good things from the prequels, and kept a sense of consistency with the OT. Thanks for the feedback, everyone. I realise that it does take ages to read. It certainly took me ages to write, let alone proof-read.
You didn't like 'Heavens to Murgatroid!'? Awww...that was one of my favourite lines. Any ideas for a replacement line to indicate Obi-wan's astonishment?