Nice job!
You’ve edited out the Stormtrooper bumping his head, but left him adjusting his helmet a moment later, when the other troopers enter the room.
The tentacle grabbing Luke sounds very good, as does Chewie beating on the door.
Some of the wider shots look a little lighter compared to the tighter shots (inconsistent black level?)
The video quality is very nice. Lovely colours.
Yeah I don’t have any rotoscoping software for video so I kind of have to leave him fiddling but it’s not that noticeable as the headbanger goof
Also yes I noticed that and I wanted to address that before I read your post. I was not sure if I had to desturate the main source to mix the shadow detail to undo the crushed black. Turns out I did not have to. So I re-upped the video and it’s a little better now on V3.
I think not having sound for the tentacle and R2-D2’s arm was quite bad errors to be honest and what with a little music sound effects and some color work I can say I am done with this now on V3.
The script states “the tentacle by the door” when they get out the trash compactor and I think that is the eye of the dianoga to be honest. I think the scene works better without that shot. And including it late makes the scene when they leave work better too.
I think I spotted one more issue Leia is seen to shout “Luke!” but the actual audio is heard later on. So if I do a V4 i will just quietly fix that problem. But for now this is better than last upload.
Edit:
5 versions later updated to final. 4 times the audio goes out of synch a headache but worth it… It’s done now anyway the soundmix and frame count / work. It’s as good as I can do.