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Post #1523776

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szopman
Parent topic
Smudger9's Andor Movie Series [EP1 & EP2 Released: 4K; 5.1 Audio] [EP3 & EP4 WIP]
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Date created
12-Feb-2023, 6:07 PM

I still hasn’t finished watching (won’t be able to watch it all at once today) but I noticed one little thing that makes the opening text feel very off.

The first line is centered, while the other 3 paragraphs are to the left. Its a little detail maybe but it really “hit” my eyes and made it look very faneditish to me.

The written content itself and its pacing is great, not too long,not too short, more like “Solo”. But still, I really think the format has to be corrected 😉

Once I watch it all, I ll be able to share more insights 😉