ADigitalMan did the same thing in his edit and I really liked the way it gave a much more unsettling tone to the scene, and also backed up Padme's reasons for not wanting to get too involved with him at first. But, ADM's scene was mostly whittled away and came out just a little short.
With the way Sluggo suggested, you don't really lose any of the info or exchanges in the scene but you still get the effect, which I think would work even better.
But, that's, of course, for someone who isn't redubbing all of Anakin's dialogue. In your version, Trooperman, the possibilities are really endless as to what he could say.
P.S. - Maybe it would be a good idea for someone to compile a list of all the changes Trooperman has discussed and confirmed throughout this thread and tack it to the first post of the first page so we can reference it? Is that even possible?