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Post #1523456

Author
Hal 9000
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
10-Feb-2023, 9:12 PM

Could we try “He’s too dangerous, Rey” for the short scene? I feel like addressing Rey by name helped the delivery and make it feel less like dialogue lifted from TFA where she barely talked to Rey at all.

I like “He’s” but feel the one that ended with “, Rey” cohered better into the scene.