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Post #1523371

Author
Hal 9000
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
10-Feb-2023, 3:02 PM

Now that’d be a great line. I love it.

I’m not sure how best to pursue the opportunity of adding something before her line, “always, in the shadows from the very beginning.” I’m thinking something that makes the line feel like it’s something about this news about Palpatine rather than clearly an old line about Snoke. But, it sounds solidly like the beginning of a sentence rather than the end.