That first one is flawless. The second one is absolutely fine, but I can’t quite put my finger on why, to me, it doesn’t quite fit the tone of the scene? Almost like Kylo needs to go a bit more introspective/punctuating with ‘in more than one way’?
Post #1523168
- Author
- EddieDean
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1523168/action/topic#1523168
- Date created
- 9-Feb-2023, 5:02 AM