Smudger, I think the text is a bit too long (and it goes too fast). I like the idea of doing the “Solo” kind of opening crawl, but I think it was shorter and more laconic there. I think you should keep it more simple and it should be more about Andor.
Post #1522436
- Author
- szopman
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- Smudger9's Andor Movie Series [EP1 & EP2 Released: 4K; 5.1 Audio] [EP3 & EP4 WIP]
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- Date created
- 4-Feb-2023, 5:08 PM