Honestly an ingenious way of cutting out the brothel and the sister plot line all together by stitching the “him arriving and him leaving” scenes together. Also good call on the crawl, I don’t think it was a good fit for the show.
Can’t wait to check this out!
Thanks.
I’ve had a very productive day and think I’ve got a satisfactory, non-saga intro.
Here is a link to anyone that fancies checking it out. It also includes the first 15mins of the edit.
Not much left to do now… just the closing credits, chapter markers and a final watch-through.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1X5qmVHhBa7vbp_iuVW53DKbEmC2K8T1R