“The darkening stars” feels to me like the strongest, most poetic ending phrase.
It would pair well with either the earlier “It is a time of despair” or “The galaxy is in crisis,” to avoid repetition from opening with another line about darkness.
Post #1521174
- Author
- VVPizza
- Parent topic
- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1521174/action/topic#1521174
- Date created
- 27-Jan-2023, 2:00 AM