Ronster said:
I redid the Techdome Edit to improve it and added the Blue Milk Scene.Nice! if you want 1920 wide blue milk with no dust here is a link (no audio).
the google preview stinks so download to see full qual.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1o2fmTaQL1RFOqgSPhoSJQkSXiTqc1oQR/view?usp=sharing
I spent 3 hours on this scene removing as many imperfections although you probably would not think that. The color grade is higher SAT to match adywan. Comparison below (yea the overlay ANH-X text is only on the comparison I do.)
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1onQ1ekaoUMFnVTxgiGQZyxStypkxhUdx/view
but obviously adjust to your taste if inserting. Mine is 23.97 as well. Enjoy
I like your background sounds in blue milk with the generators/kitchen equipment sound. My blue milk is going somewhere else (before breakfast) as there is radio drama additional meal scene and dialogue and using blue milk to set that scene up. but your edit works here perfectly and where it was meant to go I’m sure.
Your Tech dome looks great. I have more radio drama audio with 3PO and Mark Hamill which gives that scene a few extra seconds and confirms that what luke sees with treadwell was indeed the same ship the droids came from, but what you have here cleans up the “official” cut of this. I thought I saw an extra shot of oil bath at one time (was that your first shot)? I would have to go see if that was it? just a small extra angle if I remember. Only other suggestion is to remove the audio where 3PO sais he is not sure he has been in many battles as clearly time has passed since EP III memory wipe and now, although that is subjective and very small detail. I think there was a Youtube cut that someone tried that idea out.
anyway nice work.
I am trying to finish the colorizations of the ESB "Friends watch Luke’s bacta bath scene atm, but will go check out and do the tweaks on Tosche later mid-week.
I totally understand when you say this took 3 hours. That Techdome edit has been on and off for 6 months and it all started with just wanting to hear water dripping off C3P0 like the onset audio scene in a documentary when he came out the oil bath. Then it grew to adding sound for the elevator on the oil bath then it became adding sound for Luke using his tools which I got from the treadwell scenes as at the time I figured it was not needed. Then I noticed the footage and the audio never matched, then I started noticing shot’s were in the wrong order for the hologram then finally I decided to fix the editing up for R2-F2 so it’s not so jarring I found the audio sample in the documentary to fix the projector coming on scene and then I thought seeing as I spent so long on it I may aswell sling blue milk in at the end. But what started out as simply wanting to hear water drip off 3P0 took on a life of it’s own. Thanks for the kind feedback on this it’s been a a long journey for that scene and I will now make one more go because you provided the scene but I want to improve the closeups of Leia shots too. The color is wrong here too bright in the mid’s. I will now endeavor to make just a bit better.