I believe Luke and treadwell were meant for the beginning as in the novel and radio drama it is clear he is on the farm with them and sees the battle. I think its kind of where people expect it, but your take is artistic choice so I would say it’s what feels right to you. If you add there I would show additional shot of the homestead burning with a composited treadwell of center and some story troopers from some footage then treadwell getting shot so there is more context to where he is and what you are seein (that it is taking place miles away)
Yeah I am splitting it into 3 parts
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very start Video is up there in the thread a rough timing.
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When Sandcrawler Arrives
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Treadwell get’s shot (It’s kind of corney if droids keep exploding of their own malfunctions but who knows perhaps if they actually existed it might be a trait?) 😃
The cut music from the Radio Drama for the binoculars being thrown at Luke has awkward sound over it… Like boxes being dropped and chewbacca growls also so it may ne hard to isolate this but I will give it a shot. Anyway have a nice Christmas Break.