That’s fair. The problem I have with that scene in a Finn-Rose romance edit is when he walks away with the hand on the shoulder and the tight-lipped smile I read it as almost patronizing. There is no warmth there. Ultimately it’s less about adding in a suggestion of romance but more taking out something that possibly contradicts the believability of romance between them.
Post #1514945
- Author
- amobex
- Parent topic
- Unusual Sequel Trilogy Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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- Date created
- 11-Dec-2022, 7:09 AM