I noticed that the file is no longer available. I hope that means you took it down pending a new version and not because you gave up on this project. You had some really excellent changes in your work print and a lot of promising bigger ideas.
Oh no, absolutely not. I will make an improved more finale version - when my brain is ready for it. It’s a demanding project, and your second feedback was so good (i think I agreed with 90% of it) that I will use it as a blueprint when I go back through for the Version 2.
But for now, I need a break from Rings of Power.
The only reason I didn’t reply as of yet was simply due to the other projects I’m doing in between and the fact that your reply was so good and so long that I felt it deserved more read-throughs first.