My thoughts and suggestions on S01E02: Malevolence.

The fade to black when Grievous groans after being told they have to navigate around the nebula is a bit off and sudden.
Since the Malevolence conflict is presented as happening straight after Christophsis and Ahsoka becoming Anakin’s Padawan, Yoda’s line of ‘twice the trouble they have become’ doesn’t hold up much here I feel.
For the shortcut, I think it would be beneficial to see Shadow Squadron go through the nebula and see why the Separatists didn’t go through it themselves, a straight hyperspace jump seems unrealistic that the Separatists wouldn’t know about it and make the jump themselves.
For all the talk about how the Malevolence is such a super and secret weapon, we really should see it get fired and used successfully at least once, maybe at the beginning against Plo Koon’s fleet. I don’t feel it’s enough for us to just get told it’s a powerful ion cannon. I don’t think the VFX for it is goofy.
Reordering of scenes and removal of Padme’s inclusion and antics aboard the Malevolence is a great plus, great job!