it’s an improvement but I still think you need to remove the ear sore that is the rebels music when the logo pops out, much like Eddie did with his series.
How about trying to use the same music as he did and see do it works? I like how he times the epic music perfectly for when the clone wars logo pops and it gives me chills
I think using different music here from Eddie is the right choice for this edit as I don’t want to copy his work. I feel if I use that music I’ll turn from inspiration from Eddie to a copy of Eddie, you know?