Here are some notes:
- Keep the opening logo. Cut directly to the Arkham Asylum/Two-Face escape deleted scene. Add some music and sound effects. Cut to Bruce's visit to Wayne Enterprise and his meeting with Edward. Cut some of Carrey's goofiness - basically simple dialogue he says to himself. Bruce sees the bat signal, goes into his office, takes the ride to the Batcave, and then cut to the opening titles with the names, etc. flying around. This leads back into the original opening of the film. Cut some of Two-Face's stuff. I noticed he tends to emphasis his grunts, etc. Maybe these could be muted out? If possible, add a bit of the extended scene where Two-Face says Batman is a killer. This was important in the script (his guilt about his parent's death), but I don't know if it's necessary in the film.