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mrbenja0618
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THE MANDOVERSE (The Mandalorian Season 1 to 3 & The Book of Boba Fett) | 10 Feature-Length Chapters
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30-Oct-2022, 7:01 AM

LILIAN02230 said:

mrbenja0618 said:

Excited about your progress, but I have some notes.

I appreciate you wanting to eliminate the Krayt side quest, but for me, this doesn’t work. We are randomly on the massive carcass and all of sudden Cobb is thanking Mando. Trying to watch this blind, I’m not sure someone who hasn’t seen the show will understand the exchange.

Also, the color grading is a bit on the hot/overexposed side. For a show that seems to lean hard on Rec.709, maybe try going in another direction, pull back on the highlights maybe.

What are you editing on?

For me it’s not a real problem because on the travel to the carcass Cobb tell it’s story to Mando and where/how he got the armor, by this way he can thanking Mando because he appreciate the fact he doesn’t kill him for that, I hope you’ll understand my point. And the meat carcass can be explain with the “Obi Wan Kenobi” show, it’s not a problem.

Meanway, I think about the possibility of re-insert the original sequence.

Sure, I understand your point, but I fear that others will not understand as I didn’t while watching. It’s a bit jarring. My point is, if you have to explain it to people, does it really work?

I hope you don’t think I’m pooping on this, I’m simply encouraging you to think harder on it. It also requires some more plot to explain why people and Tuskens are working with each other. You don’t have the Boba story yet, but even so, that wouldn’t explain why the people can work with Tuskens with no issues.

Maybe consider a heavily reduced Krayt sequence and then it can be kind of like the first 30 minutes of Return of the Jedi.