Loving the colorized cantina shot there…
I think with anything like a rough cut which that is from of the cantina scene there are things that are not so important.
There is however one particular part of the rough cut where Obiwan goes past the bar with Chewbacca and the informant then walks away to the left behind chewbacca.
This would have helped tell the story better, as the wipe would have came a small bit later so that particular scene extension is probably vastly more important than anything else in that part. As when we wipe to outside we can identify he is either a spy or even a disgruntled pilot who is down on his luck and jealous.
Small snippets can make a big difference in a good way where as sometimes whole sequences can be difficult and cumbersome.
I might send you a few clips if you don’t mind later on that you might not have…
Anyway keep up the good work.