I honestly like L8wtr’s version a little bit more. Your version feels “off-beat” if that makes sense. Like the timing between Obi-Wan and Anakin jumping is off.
Interesting, thank you for the feedback. Oddly enough that is precisely my issue with L8wtr’s version. We cut immeditaely from a shot of Anakin swiping beneath Obi wan’s feet as he leaps up directly to the next shot of Anakin jumping up, without any time between showing Obi-wan complete the jump so that Anakin’s stance can change for the shot of him jumping.